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6:23 PM, Tuesday November 29th 2022

Hello! You did a good job, but there are some issues. I made a video explaining the issues so hopefully it's a bit easier to understand. Let me know if you have trouble watching it or can't understand something or anything like that.

So before moving on I want you to do 2 more pages of animals the same way as on the previous one, keeping in mind the things I said on the video:

-drawing through everything

-adding simple additional forms and not complex ones

-starting with the initial forms as explained on the demo

-connecting every form with other form with intersections and drawing through them

-paying attention to the size of the sausages of the sausage method, so they're consistent.

I also want you to use pictures of animals on which you can see the legs fully and they aren't covered by grass or anything, that'll make it easier for you as well.

That being said, good luck and keep up the good work! Make sure to ask if there's something you don't understand.

Next Steps:

2 more animal drawings as requested

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
5:37 PM, Monday December 5th 2022

I have given the link for the rivsion for the other one who did the critique down below.

6:33 PM, Monday December 5th 2022
edited at 6:49 PM, Dec 5th 2022

I asked you to do two, not one. So if you want critique from me you have to follow what I asked. That being said as I told you before you are missing some things I explained on the video (mainly drawing through everything and starting with the initial forms as explained on the demo), so I recommend you to watch it again before doing the next one if you choose to.

Good luck and remember to ask any doubts you have

edited at 6:49 PM, Dec 5th 2022
3:09 AM, Monday December 12th 2022

Here is the link for second part of the revison but I'm a total nervous wreck. This looks ugly and I fear I didn't pass even though I tried to remember everything including a halfway point to show at least some of what was said was applied: https://imgur.com/a/h9nBDgC

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