Hello! You did a good job, but there are some issues. I made a video explaining the issues so hopefully it's a bit easier to understand. Let me know if you have trouble watching it or can't understand something or anything like that.

So before moving on I want you to do 2 more pages of animals the same way as on the previous one, keeping in mind the things I said on the video:

-drawing through everything

-adding simple additional forms and not complex ones

-starting with the initial forms as explained on the demo

-connecting every form with other form with intersections and drawing through them

-paying attention to the size of the sausages of the sausage method, so they're consistent.

I also want you to use pictures of animals on which you can see the legs fully and they aren't covered by grass or anything, that'll make it easier for you as well.

That being said, good luck and keep up the good work! Make sure to ask if there's something you don't understand.