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6:33 PM, Monday December 5th 2022
edited at 6:49 PM, Dec 5th 2022

I asked you to do two, not one. So if you want critique from me you have to follow what I asked. That being said as I told you before you are missing some things I explained on the video (mainly drawing through everything and starting with the initial forms as explained on the demo), so I recommend you to watch it again before doing the next one if you choose to.

Good luck and remember to ask any doubts you have

edited at 6:49 PM, Dec 5th 2022
3:09 AM, Monday December 12th 2022

Here is the link for second part of the revison but I'm a total nervous wreck. This looks ugly and I fear I didn't pass even though I tried to remember everything including a halfway point to show at least some of what was said was applied: https://imgur.com/a/h9nBDgC

7:44 PM, Saturday December 17th 2022

Alright! So overall you've gotten the concepts down, good job! I made another video again to explain it but you've done a great job understanding the concepts of the lesson.

So now like I said in the video I want you to do 2 more animals so you get a bit of more of practice before moving on, good luck and keep up the good work!

Next Steps:

2 more pages of animals like the previous ones

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
1:37 AM, Tuesday December 27th 2022
edited at 1:38 AM, Dec 27th 2022

Well here they are but again I'm not confident I passed: https://imgur.com/a/b2Xh684

edited at 1:38 AM, Dec 27th 2022
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