6:33 PM, Monday December 5th 2022
I asked you to do two, not one. So if you want critique from me you have to follow what I asked. That being said as I told you before you are missing some things I explained on the video (mainly drawing through everything and starting with the initial forms as explained on the demo), so I recommend you to watch it again before doing the next one if you choose to.
Good luck and remember to ask any doubts you have