Hello there, sorry for the late reply, (well and the poorly done revision), here is another revision https://imgur.com/uPzmZ0f
Thank you again for the critique
i am so sorry for the abysmally late reply please feel free to hate me. your countour curves have improved quite a lot honestly. but please sure not to fuss over the lines and to properly try to convey the form of the sausages form description over wobbly lines
again sorry for replying after 8 months
No need to be sorry, I actually completely forgot about this submission and I redid lesson 4 https://drawabox.com/community/submission/DA0RW1O in October of last year, I can't really tell if you want a revision or if you forgot to mark my submission as complete, I had put the link to the redone submission in the case of the former
This is one of my favourite books. It's a fantasy-comedy romp, and the world that J. Zachary Pike has created honestly takes my breath away. There are laughs at every turn, but the story is not without its heart wrenching moments - some for which I have yet to fully forgive the author.
If you're at all curious about the kinds of nonsense I read, or just need something new to sink your teeth into, this is one I can highly recommend. On top of that, being self-published by an indie author, it's the kind of thing where your individual support can go a long way.
P.S: The audiobook, with narration from Doug Tisdale, is especially good, and elevates the story in ways I can't rightly describe.
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