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3:54 PM, Tuesday January 3rd 2023

ok so let's begin

First of I think your lines could be a lot more confident. Your lines are wobbly. So please make sure to commit lines that are originating from your shoulder. and I see you didn't put a contour line where you should have.

and when drawing textures you should draw the form first. In the case off fur you can outline the fur then shade it. Not draw the individual strands like you've done in your bee drawing

Next Steps:

1 page of contour curves

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
3:18 PM, Sunday January 29th 2023

Hello there sorry for letting you wait 27 days I don't check my notifications that often, I assume you wanted me to draw this https://imgur.com/a/Ote8Q9T

Thanks for the critique

9:29 AM, Sunday February 12th 2023

no worries I'm like you in that regard as well.

for starters your organic forms are too complex make sure your being confident with you lines

Next Steps:

1 more page of contour curves please check the lesson page as well as the video

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
8:47 PM, Wednesday July 26th 2023

Hello there, sorry for the late reply, (well and the poorly done revision), here is another revision https://imgur.com/uPzmZ0f

Thank you again for the critique

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