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1:26 AM, Monday July 18th 2022

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sausages are really my downfall TT. thank you for the critique!

7:01 AM, Wednesday July 20th 2022

i think you could have made this insect way bigger putting your page at a vertical angle.

your sausages looks better! they still lack solidity and they don't quite look 3d but i think it's enough to let you go on lesson 5, there you will use sausages a LOT! so take this as an opportunity to learn and get better at it.

best of luck

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