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12:39 PM, Saturday August 22nd 2020

Hi Hall! let's just get right into all of your exercise

1. Lines for most the part all of your lines are great! even though i noticed that some of your lines are wobbly in your SIL exercise and it's okay cause you've done a great job on all of your lines exercise!

2. Ellipses good job on all of your ellipses exercise too! it is really difficult to draw ellipses ( but don't worry, just remember that this is all just an exercise or a fundamentals, not a final artwork :D )

3. Boxes i don't have any comments on your plotted perspective and rotating boxes exercise other than a great job! as for your plotted perspective, again you've done a great job on it! it is hard though because you are drawing it without a ruler, but atleast you understand the concept of doing rough 1 point perspective, and as for your organic perspective, i see that some of your boxes are elongated, they're supposed to be on the same size. Nonetheless congratulations on finishing Lessons 1 :D

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i request thou to do the 250 boxes exercise

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9:10 PM, Saturday August 22nd 2020

Thank you for the kind words and critique overall!!

About the organic perspective boxes, I'm not too sure I understand what you meant about them being elongated... can't they have any proportions on that exercise?

I myself noticed that a few boxes, mostly in the 1st page are forshortened and that's probably because they have angles over 90 in some point, but I think I got more mindful of that as I went along haha

Again, thank you for your time, this was very much appreciated!

5:07 AM, Sunday August 23rd 2020

What i meant about the organic perspective is that some of your boxes are very long, and again, i think it's fine cause your organic perspective exercise looks very convincing and good :)

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