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1:10 PM, Thursday March 24th 2022

Well done! I've also just completed lesson 2 and it was a doosy. I think one thing you could really benefit from is just taking things a bit slower. It's often hard with these lessons and exercises but it really can be worth it in the end. Try to prevent yourself from scribbling and or doing guesswork.

Some of your textures and dissections, as well as the intersections and organic arrows seem a bit rushed and messy.

Your organic intersections and organic forms were great!

9:24 PM, Thursday March 24th 2022

Thank you! i will try to slow down next time!

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