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8:17 PM, Friday August 14th 2020

Ok, I can see the blood now, Be careful!

Anyway, your texture homework is significantly improved. I don't think any specific feedback is necessary as you are going in a good direction with it now.

The organic arrows are still sloppy. You have a lot of lines that intersect(for example the 'body' of an arrow will intersect everywhere with the 'head' of the arrow). There's also still a slight issue with arrows expanding and narrowing randomly(although less than before). There is more variety in the arrows now though, so that is an improvement.

I scrolled through other people's homework and found a good example for organic arrows.

https://imgur.com/gallery/ywK9Be1

I'm marking your lesson as complete, as we aren't chasing perfectionism here. I gave you a more indepth feedback on the arrows again because there is another organic arrows exercise in lesson 3 that you'll need to do. I think analyzing the work of the person I linked will help you improve.

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Good luck with lesson 3!

This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 2 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
8:34 AM, Saturday August 15th 2020

Thanks for the critique. It had been really helpful :)

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