Thanks for the critique. Here is the correction. On the third picture that mess is blood because I accidentally cut my finger while drawing, so don't get it wrong I didn't try to experiment with colours or eat my lunch on the paper.
https://drive.google.com/drive/u/1/folders/1Y7nfAlX8laDSFVpQMs3Uodc9fkqoCRJp
The drive is locked. Please make it shareable so I could open it, or rehost to imgur :)
Oh, sorry. I made it shareable https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1F5u_NhxeYzBecfA6xBLLIlN6fcfnlOtC?usp=sharing
Ok, I can see the blood now, Be careful!
Anyway, your texture homework is significantly improved. I don't think any specific feedback is necessary as you are going in a good direction with it now.
The organic arrows are still sloppy. You have a lot of lines that intersect(for example the 'body' of an arrow will intersect everywhere with the 'head' of the arrow). There's also still a slight issue with arrows expanding and narrowing randomly(although less than before). There is more variety in the arrows now though, so that is an improvement.
I scrolled through other people's homework and found a good example for organic arrows.
https://imgur.com/gallery/ywK9Be1
I'm marking your lesson as complete, as we aren't chasing perfectionism here. I gave you a more indepth feedback on the arrows again because there is another organic arrows exercise in lesson 3 that you'll need to do. I think analyzing the work of the person I linked will help you improve.
Next Steps:
Good luck with lesson 3!
This recommendation is really just for those of you who've reached lesson 6 and onwards.
I haven't found the actual brand you buy to matter much, so you may want to shop around. This one is a "master" template, which will give you a broad range of ellipse degrees and sizes (this one ranges between 0.25 inches and 1.5 inches), and is a good place to start. You may end up finding that this range limits the kinds of ellipses you draw, forcing you to work within those bounds, but it may still be worth it as full sets of ellipse guides can run you quite a bit more, simply due to the sizes and degrees that need to be covered.
No matter which brand of ellipse guide you decide to pick up, make sure they have little markings for the minor axes.
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