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10:16 PM, Monday August 9th 2021

The convergences are certainly better. You've still got a lot of curves that are drawn directly on the page without first laying down scaffolding made up of straight lines, though. Also the ellipses for your wheels are way too wide, so they look like they're turning more towards the viewer. If you look at the ellipses you used to create the grid itself (which themselves represent circles in 3D space), they're way narrower, even when they're right next to the front wheel.

Honestly, the subdivision and all of that is coming along really well, but it still feels like you're all over the place when it comes to constructing the car itself.

I'd recommend that for the other car, you move away from these and try your hand at an old Ford Model T. They tend to be boxier and can help students get a better sense of how to approach the process without the confusion of having so many additional curves flying around.

10:48 PM, Monday August 9th 2021

Got it! I will use the old model t and boxy looking cars for my other car drawings! Thanks for that feedback! My apologies for the wheels, I was attempting to make it look like my reference image. My guess is that the person parked their car with their steering wheel turned to the right. I will try to fix these wheel issues and plot anything curved in my next drawings.

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