The convergences are certainly better. You've still got a lot of curves that are drawn directly on the page without first laying down scaffolding made up of straight lines, though. Also the ellipses for your wheels are way too wide, so they look like they're turning more towards the viewer. If you look at the ellipses you used to create the grid itself (which themselves represent circles in 3D space), they're way narrower, even when they're right next to the front wheel.

Honestly, the subdivision and all of that is coming along really well, but it still feels like you're all over the place when it comes to constructing the car itself.

I'd recommend that for the other car, you move away from these and try your hand at an old Ford Model T. They tend to be boxier and can help students get a better sense of how to approach the process without the confusion of having so many additional curves flying around.

Oh, one more thing - I'm adding this as a separate comment and not an edit just in case you already saw the other reply.

When you do your next drawing:

• Include your references

• Keep track of how long you spend on the drawing, how many sittings, how much time per sitting, across how many days

• Take photos step by step. I'd like to see how you're thinking through the drawing, so seeing each stage of the drawing will help me better grasp your mindset.