Hello Lordsagan, I’ll be reviewing your 250 Box Challenge today.

First off, congratulations on completing the first hurdle of Drawabox. It’s definitely a long marathon, but the quality of work between the start and end pages really demonstrates overall improvement. Now let's begin with the critique.

Things you did well:

• Clear experimentation of box size, foreshortening, and orientation. Foreshortening was especially pushed to its limits as you progressed through the challenge. This is a positive habit to carry forward and helps progress our spatial reasoning.

• Hatching: from the start of the challenge, it's evident you patiently place your lines with the same confidence as every other line.

• Lines confidence was definitely a major strength here as you practiced drawing straight from the shoulder. Construction lines are relatively straight, and you maintain confidence in your lines.

Things you can work on:

• Shallow boxes run into issues with 2-3 sets of lines being parallel that don’t converge towards their respective vanishing point. Whether it's gradual or quick, all lines should converge. It may be difficult to judge gradual convergence on shallow boxes, but we want to be aware of the angle when estimating to ensure lines aren’t parallel. Here’s an example showing parallel lines straying away as the extension line lengthens: https://imgur.com/mWLlnYl

• Line weight is well done overall; however, the attempted superimposed line sometimes wobbles or arcs slightly. Confidence is our first priority at all times. Overshooting your lines is fine as long as the superimposed line remains smooth.

Overall, you seem to have consistent line and convergence accuracy. I’ll mark this down as complete and send you off to Lesson 2. Good luck!