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11:40 AM, Wednesday March 9th 2022

i really agree with koyomi that your lines and elipses are great !!! but when it comes to rotated boxes i see some mistakes like his boxes are not rotating they are out of perspective maybe he needs to give it a try again for rotated boxes

so the key is use the neighbouring edges bro and as the boxes rotate the vanishing points are also getting closer to each other and they are along the horizontal line and that's what makes them look rotated

i just want you to give a try again for rotated boxes ok

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11:12 PM, Thursday March 10th 2022

i will try again this ex tommorow thank you!

2:23 PM, Friday March 11th 2022

https://imgur.com/a/mzuunPq

hi, sorry this try is worst than the first you see :(

i understand my mistakes, better than nothing

2:39 AM, Sunday March 13th 2022

no problem just move on to 250 boxes

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