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7:44 PM, Friday October 28th 2022

Hello. I will be reiviewing your lessong one hw

Superimposed Lines: Not bad with these.

Ghosted Lines: It does appear you are being aware of connecting from one point to another. Make sure you keep an eye on the ink in your pent as it does appear to be thinned out. Or not pressing hard enough.

Ghosted Planes: I am seeing the same thing again with the pen and ink mentioned in Ghosted lines. But nothing seems out of place other than that. Good work.

Table of Elipses: The biggest things i see is a lot of breaking out of bounds for the elipses whether it's the lines of the tables or into nerighbor elipses.

Elipses in Planes: I still am seeing a bit more of breaking out of boundries but a lot less this time. Good.

Funnels: These could have been spread out more and not so close together. On the other hand much better, the elipses are now staying more withing boundries and not breaking out.

Plotted perspectives: Because you have filled in a face for all boxes I can't tell how they look drawn through. I am glad you did provide a second one and that is much better.

Rough Perspective: Once again seeing fully filled faces making it hard to tell how your boxes look.

Rotated Boxes: I do see some missing boxes at the top. Try to take the picture without covering up some of the drawing with a thumb or hand.

Organic Perspective: A lot of these boxes are quiet wonky in shape.

Next Steps:

The main thing is making sure you are pressing hard enough on the page and you pen doesn't run out of ink. Also I think Re-reading direction of elipses in tables, Rough Perspective, and Organic perspective while submitting one page for each would help before moving on. Especially since in the next challange the boxes can't be filled in for one face.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
9:27 PM, Saturday February 11th 2023

i just saw this.

thanks for the review.

gonna retake the course with your advices, thanks.

11:48 AM, Friday July 28th 2023

Very well.

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