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8:14 PM, Thursday December 8th 2022

The lines that go through the middle of the sausage are the minor axes (that's the plural form of 'axis', apparently), yes, and they're supposed to be curved, not straight, but not waves. A wave is just a curve that turns more than once. The one sausage I linked is the only one where you've done a wave instead of a curve, so don't worry that much about it.

And by consistent width, I refer to the shape of the sausage itself, not to the ellipses. The width/degree of your ellipses is fine. What i mean is that your sausages should basically be spheres connected by tubes of consistent width, as detailed here.

1:01 PM, Friday December 9th 2022

Okay great!! Thank you!!

4:56 PM, Tuesday December 13th 2022

Hi Keisari!

https://imgur.com/a/oAejppv

Here's my HW.

I did the exercises twice because I wanted to practice a bit more. (Plus, I kind of got the hang of the arrows exercice once I finished the first page, that's why I wrote myself a few corrections. The reason why I re-did it because I didn't want to hand in a self-corrected HW, when it's supposed to be corrected by others.)

Anyway that's all. Hope you have a great day and thanks for taking a look at it :D

9:50 PM, Thursday December 15th 2022

Hi, sorry for the wait!

You've definitely shown an improvement in your Organic Arrows. They look much better and you seen to have understood what you're supposed to be striving for. Good job! Now you only need the mileage.

Your Organic Intersections also look better and you seem to be headed towards the right direction, although I'd like to once again say that they're not supposed to be cutting into each other, as you seem to have done here and here, for example.

Having that in mind, you'll have tons of time to work on that in your future warmups, so I'll be clearing you to proceed.

4:39 PM, Monday December 19th 2022

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