##### 9:03 PM, Sunday June 12th 2022

Thanks for the feedback.

Here is my second try at Ghosted Lines and Planes: https://imgur.com/a/gtdUy1z

(I'll post these in the Discord as well)

I tried drawing from my shoulder more, and put more focus on confident strokes over accuracy.

##### 2:00 PM, Monday June 13th 2022 edited at 2:02 PM, Jun 13th 2022

Hello again I already see some great improvement nice job! there is a little wobbling in some of the lines but that's gonna be solved with some more practice. When you get better at drawing lines with confidence you can then start focusing your attention on accuracy but always try to keep your lines confident, drawn from the shoulder and ghosted you did great i'll mark this lesson complete.

Next Steps:

Next you should start getting ready for the 250 boxes challenge read the instructions carefully and follow them to the T, read through the boxes section of Lesson 1 as many times as you can. This challenge will not only improve your spatial awareness when its comes to rotating forms (boxes in this case) in 3d space it will help your lines too! good luck Bob.

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edited at 2:02 PM, Jun 13th 2022
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