2 users agree
3:46 PM, Tuesday May 19th 2020

Hi,

Overall I would say you did okay, I really liked your ellipses, however you do need to improve on drawing straight lines and attempt to use foreshortening. . For the organic perspective exercise, most of the lines are going parallel or even diverging out. I would say have one more attempt and then move on to 250 box challenge.

Next Steps:

2 filled pages of the Organic Box exercise.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
1:14 PM, Friday May 22nd 2020

Hi,

Thank you for the critique. I have done the work as asked.

Here is the link to my second attempt at the organic perspective exercise, https://imgur.com/a/Igvai5v

8:16 AM, Sunday May 24th 2020
edited at 8:19 AM, May 24th 2020

Hi,

Well done, I can see the improvement! I would recommend proceeding with 250 box challenge.

Take note that I'm not an official marker for you to receive a badge of lesson 1, so you might want to join discord chat to ask people for additional feedback.

Next Steps:

250 Box challenge

This community member feels the lesson should be marked as complete, and 2 others agree. The student has earned their completion badge for this lesson and should feel confident in moving onto the next lesson.
edited at 8:19 AM, May 24th 2020
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