12:11 AM, Tuesday September 15th 2020
Hi Juice,
I've checked your submission,
Gonna start out by giving you an advice. Wait for a review before moving on to another lesson/challenge. What makes Draw a Box good it's the fact that you have other people to review your work and give you feedback, so you don't carry your mistakes as you move foward.
Now, on to the actual review:
It seems like you got the idea of the challenge, your boxes got better as you progressed. However, there is an area on which you could improve.
Your line quality. Now, I've talked about this in the critique I just did tou your lesson 1. But, because you move from lesson 1 on to this challenge without waiting for a review, you kinda dragged that mistake on to your boxes. However, your lines do get better in this challenge, but they are lacking a little more confident, so ghost your lines, repeat them and make one confident stroke.
I know it's hard to wait for a review for a long time, but you have to understand that the lesson it's just half of what you can learn, the other half comes from the feedback another person gives you. So be paitient
I'm gonna mark this lesson as completed! Keep it up.
Next Steps:
Move on to lesson 2!