## Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes

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##### 10:50 PM, Friday June 10th 2022

Hello my name is Rob and I'm a teaching assistant who will be reviewing your lesson one homework. You appear to be missing all of the homework pages for the box section of lesson one from this imgure album. I see one organic perspective page but the rest are missing.

``````1 filled page of the Plotted Perspective exercise

2 filled pages of the Rough Perspective exercise

1 filled page of the Rotated Boxes exercise

2 filled pages of the Organic Perspective exercise``````

I'm guessing that they are finished but something messed up while you were uploading so can you try adding them to the album again. I need the full submission in order to do this critique. Thanks.

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Missing all of the box exercises pages from the imgur album. I need the full lesson one submission in order to do the critique

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##### 4:11 AM, Saturday June 11th 2022

https://imgur.com/a/fXYZskx

Sorry about that mate, should be all the exercises there now.

##### 4:51 AM, Sunday June 12th 2022

Starting with your superimposed lines these are off to a fine start. You are keeping a clearly defined starting point with all of your wavering at the opposite end. Your ghosted lines and planes turned out well. You are using the ghosting method to good effect to get confident linework with a pretty decent deal of accuracy that will get better and better with practice.

Your rotated box exercise turned out pretty well. I like that you drew this nice and big as that really helps when dealing with complex spatial problems. You also did a good job drawing through your boxes and keeping your gaps narrow and consistent. While the rotations here aren't perfect this was very well done for the most part. This is a great exercise to come back to after a few lessons to see how much your spatial thinking ability has improved. Your organic perspective exercises are looking pretty good. You seem to be getting comfortable using the ghosting method and drawing from your shoulder for confident linework which is great. Your box constructions are pretty solid for the most part and you already seem to have a decent grasp on how box lines need to converge to vps. That said there are some wonky convergences here and there so the 250 box challenge will be a great next step for you.

Overall this was a really solid submission that showed a nice deal of growth. Your line confidence and ellipses are both coming along nicely. I think you are understanding most of the concepts these lessons are trying to convey quite well. I'm going to mark this as complete and good luck with the 250 box challenge. Keep up the good work!

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The 250 Box Challenge

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