6:28 PM, Thursday February 6th 2020
I... don't think you're going to get it, in all honesty. There's a serious lack of confidence in your lines/ellipses, and, unfortunately, it's not something that improves throughout this submission. Personally, I'd ask you to redo the entirety of it, or, maybe, 1 page from each exercise, but I notice from your sketchbook that you've already gone far beyond this lesson, so I'm not sure. I definitely don't feel like I can, personally, give you a badge, though. So sorry.




