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6:28 PM, Thursday February 6th 2020

I... don't think you're going to get it, in all honesty. There's a serious lack of confidence in your lines/ellipses, and, unfortunately, it's not something that improves throughout this submission. Personally, I'd ask you to redo the entirety of it, or, maybe, 1 page from each exercise, but I notice from your sketchbook that you've already gone far beyond this lesson, so I'm not sure. I definitely don't feel like I can, personally, give you a badge, though. So sorry.

6:53 PM, Thursday February 6th 2020

Okay I don't mind redoing the whole lesson. I did it about 6 months ago so it's not really fresh in my mind so it should be quite beneficial doing it again. I'm just wondering if I redo it do I post a reply here or do I put a new submission?

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