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2:58 PM, Thursday August 4th 2022

Hello SEBASTIANM, I'll be reviewing your work!

Lines

They look great. I can see fraying in both sides of some of your lines, especially the curved ones, and some arching too. Make sure you are drawing from your shoulder and try to consciously curve them in the other direction to fix the mistake.

Ellipses

Your ellipses are really good. Just keep in mind that ellipses should be drawn within the bounds (either of a table or of a plane) and touching each other. Also, the minor axis should cut the ellipses into two equal halves.

Boxes

I have not much to say about them. Pretty good work. However, Rotated Boxes is missing, I can't mark the lesson as complete because of this so make sure to do the exercise and upload it.

4:18 PM, Thursday August 4th 2022

Thank you for your feedback.

My markmaking skills are improvable, I changed my pen which has already helped.

I forgot to upload "Rotated Boxes", so I did that, thanks for telling me.

1:42 PM, Friday August 5th 2022

Perfect! I'll mark it as complete now.

Next Steps:

(I know you already did, but just in case) move on to the 250 boxes challenge .

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