Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes
1:20 PM, Saturday May 16th 2020
I apologise for not using traditional ink and paper that was insisted. I worked digitally but would appreciate your critique nonetheless
I recommend resubmitting the lesson with pen and paper. 500 sheets of copypaper are normally around 2-5 dollars, and you don't have to use a fineliner. Ballpoint are a few cents only, and they do the job greatly. I'm saying this, because if you do it with ballpoint, you'll learn much more than if you do it in digital. Skills transfer, so by doing it digitally you're basically losing time and effort. Of course I won't force you, but I wanted to be sure you are aware that doing it traditionally will help you much more.
Lines get a bit wobbly at times. No matter how accurate a line is, it will always be worse than a confident line, no matter how off that is.
On boxes your lines seem to get worse in quality. Be sure you are not rushing. You should be giving your best on each line of these exercises, don't rush it. You seem not to be plotting lines in some of your boxes as well. Before drawing any line, you should first draw its ending and starting dots.
Lastly, you're repeating some lines, no matter how wrong they are, keep going as if they were correct.
Next Steps:
As I said before, I recommend you to redo this lesson in ballpoint. That's your choice however. Good luck on lesson 1 again if you follow my advice, and good luck in the box challenge too if that's your choice!
Thank you so much for your advice. I'm not crazy about the idea of redoing everything right now but I'll definitely come back to it in the future. Also, I did get impatient doing the homework so you were right about me rushing things. I'll take all you said with me and again, thank you for the feedback.
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