8:43 PM, Monday September 5th 2022
Much better overall, good work.
Remember to overshoot your contour curves so that they hook back into the form as shown here.
Other than that your forms are simpler and your linework is looking tidier, with more mileage you'll continue to improve so I'll be marking your submission complete.
Keep practicing previous exercises in you warm ups and best of luck in lesson 3.
Next Steps:
Move on to lesson 3.