10:44 PM, Monday August 31st 2020
Hi!
This is my critique.
Lines
Superimposed Lines: they wobble a bit. Remember confidence over accuracy. Look a little at the beggining of the lines they are fraying this usually happens because you are not paying enough attention.
Ghosted Lines: Some of your ghosted line wobble, but some of them are very nice. Try to make your lines confident.
Ghosted Planes: Same comments as above, although I noticed that some lines are more confident, so good job. Also sometimes you drew two lines that goes twice in the same direction this is not good thing you should draw your lines once in this exercise.
Ellipses
Tables: Sometimes it seems like you dont draw your ellipse with confidence. Try to draw your ellipses in a way that while going twice over them you finish at the same point you begin.
Planes: In this case you have the same problems that I mention above including the wobbly lines.
Funnels: The ellipses are also fairly parallel to your minor axis lines but they still have the same problem.
Boxes
Plotted Perspective: Completed. Some of the boxes look distorted you push them very far from the vanishing points. Look:
https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/7/distortion
Rough Perspective: Some of the horizontal and vertical lines for the boxes farther away from your vanishing point are not parallel with the horizon line or page edge. Don't worry though - you'll work on this in the 250 Box Challenge.
Rotated Boxes: Good spacing around the boxes. The boxes along the top/bottom of your "sphere" could have been rotated more (since they should be almost flat), but it's still a good attempt!
Organic Boxes: This exercise is difficult but you will improve in the 250 boxes challenge!
Next Steps:
250 boxes!!!