Hello
Your line are not that wobbly but you tent to curve your line as as told earlier it may happen because not using shoulder pivot but one factory might also effect is when your are executing your mark your putting too much pressure on pen
Anyway I can tell you already understand the concept told in lesson 1 so continue practicing these exercises as warm up it will going to take bit time but you will improve best of luck
Next Steps:
Go and tackle 250 boxes challenge
Hello again!
Earlier, when I'm doing the revision. I seem to decieve myself that I'm using my shoulder; however, in reality I'm using my elbow to pivot. I'll try to be more mindful about it. Also, you hit the mark with my problem in pressure. I did put much pressure on my pen while doing the activity, I never knew that it'll actually affect the output! I thank you for giving notice to those problems.
I can't thank you enough with all of these thoughtful feedback. But thank you a lot!!!
Hello
LINE :-
They are wobbly for now focus on trying to make confidence line rather than accurate line conference line are much better than accurate LINE which are wobbly as you will practice accuracy will improve over the time
And longer line have acr (trying to arch consciously to the opposite direction, it may also happen because your not useing shoulder pivot try be aware of it)
CIRCLE :-
the ellipses must be drawn confidently, prioritizing confidence and smoothness,
over accuracy.
ghosted planes with ellipses.
Try not think about touching ever point for now
table of ellipses
You did do a good job
ellipses are within the boundaries, most
ellipse touching each other, without overlapping
But in some ellipses it seems like you haven't drawn through 2
BOX :-
On rough perspective,
width lines are not parallel to horizon and same for height lines
rotated boxes
It is good
Corners are closure and boxes are rotatin
organic perspective
I can see box are rotating and sense of distance is clear
Don't worry about the box construction you will tackle it in 250 box challenge
Overall the biggest problem you have is with your confident
Next Steps:
Do to 2 pages of ghosts plane and ellipse in plane
Hello, Sharad! I appreciate using your time to critique my output. Yeah, you're right, I seem to glossed over trying to put confidence in most of my lines; so, I thank you for putting some sense into me! Anyway this is the link for my attempt in revamping my previous output:
Again, I thank you for your time!
While I have a massive library of non-instructional art books I've collected over the years, there's only a handful that are actually important to me. This is one of them - so much so that I jammed my copy into my overstuffed backpack when flying back from my parents' house just so I could have it at my apartment. My back's been sore for a week.
The reason I hold this book in such high esteem is because of how it puts the relatively new field of game art into perspective, showing how concept art really just started off as crude sketches intended to communicate ideas to storytellers, designers and 3D modelers. How all of this focus on beautiful illustrations is really secondary to the core of a concept artist's job. A real eye-opener.
Remember that when you agree with something another user has written, you are putting your own reputation behind it.
Consider the following:
Agreeing blindly just to be nice is a good way to get your permissions associated with this function revoked, so make sure that you genuinely feel that the response is beneficial to the student.
We use cookies in conjunction with Google Analytics to anonymously track how our website is used.
This data is not shared with any other parties or sold to anyone. They are also disabled until consent is provided by clicking the button below, and this consent can be revoked at any time by clicking the "Revoke Analytics Cookie Consent" link in our website footer.
You can read more about what we do with them, read our privacy policy.
