Hi.

The first thing which is noticeable are underplanned lines. It seems that you are drawing your lines way too fast and without enough ghosting leading to curvy lines. I'll provide a guide on how to fix this at the bottom of this critique. Ghosting is extremely important to build muscle memory.

Now i'll give an exercise wise critique pointing out what is right and what needs to be worked upon. Also make sure you are drawing from your shoulder rather than your wrist. While drawing long lines wrist has a limited range and as soon as the length of the line becomes more than the range of your wrist and you shift to drawing with your elbow or shoulder the line will curve.

Lines

1) Superimposed lines: Your lines seem a bit underconfident and hence wobbly. But dont worry there is always room for improvement. I feel that drawing from shoulder combined with ghosting will surely fix your lines

2) Ghosted planes + Ellipses : The same issue persists here as well. The line quality in ghosted planes is much better as compared to previous exercises

Ellipses

Again the issue seems to be not enough ghosting and drawing from the wrist. I know this problem as im currently doing 250 cylinder challenge where you have to draw like 500 ellipses and drawing from the wrist was the first mistake i saw in my method of drawing. When you draw an ellipse using your wrist, the ellipse becomes distortedat turns. This is because its hard to wrote your wrist that quickly.

Funnels

Maybe increase the size of funnels. Draw less of them but bigger. This will improve your range as you draw more varied ellipses.

Boxes

The line issue can be noticed here as well. Try to plan the trajectory of lines before anything else so that you dont have to think about anything else when you get ready to draw the lines.

Final thoughts

The perfect order to make a mark in lesson 1 is as follows:

Step 1) Plan out how you want to draw your line. This is the thinking phase.

Step 2) Place the dots for the starting and the end points for the line to fix the trajectory. Now you dont have to think about the direction of the line.

Step 3) Begin ghosting between the two lines. Take as long as you like till you feel ready.

Step 4) Put the pen to the paper and follow the ghosted motion to draw a line without thinking about anything.

Use this above guide to draw confident, ghosted lines from your shoulder. I always say this in the critiques and i'll say it again. Do not think this critique is harsh, its important to build correct habits from the start as they will be hard to fix in future lessons. Please keep these things in mind while doing the revisions and feel free to ask any questions or doubts here or on discord @VS, i'll be happy to help. Reply to this post with the corrections and i hope you improve upon your mistakes.

Good luck !