Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes
8:49 PM, Saturday August 8th 2020
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7:50 AM, Monday August 17th 2020
im sry that i didnt give clear feedback
Lines
In superimposed Lines, ur lines are wobble. u just need to draw with a flow and bit fast and smooth. just maintain a constant speed in every mark you do so that u will get smooth and confident lines.
In ghosted lines, ur lines are bit wobble at the end because u try to stop ur pen at the ending point of the line instead try to lift ur pen before reaching the ending point this might help u to control wobbling and also avoid overshooting in ur lines
In ghosted planes, the lines are little wobble. plan the edges and the connect the dots by applying the ghosted line method here
Ellipse
In table of ellipse, ur smaller ellipse are perfect and neat but u have problem with the larger ellipse its a bit wobble. I feel u its a common mistake. u have to concentrate on ghosting the larger one before drawing it which u will get good ellipse
In two of ur funnels, the minor axis doesnt cut the ellipse into equal half the purpose of this exercise is to align the ellipse to the center minor axis.
tables of ellipse, as i said before concentrate on ghosting the ellipse
Plotted perspective
they are great
Rotated box
Its a challenging exercise, u have done it well.the spacing between the edges in the back face of the boxes are great but the only thing is u have to maintain the dimensions of the boxes
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2:03 PM, Wednesday September 9th 2020
Hey Havic!
I agree with Jansiva, you can learn lots from what they said. I just noticed you are missing a couple of your exercises.
The rough perspective and organic perspective are missing. You will want to do those before you move on.
You are doing great keep at it!!
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missing exercises
redo rough perspective and organic perspective
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