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9:24 PM, Saturday October 28th 2023
Hello,
firstly the arrows, I noticed most of then are a bit scratchy. Remeber to be confident and ghost your lines before hand. You've done a good job on the perspective (getting bigger as the are closer to the viewer).
The sahoe of the organic forms are well done and smooth and I can see with the ellipses you've tried to change the degrees. My only complaint is on the contour lines, you avent hooked them at the ends, this will help make it look more round/3D.
I think you've done a great job with the texture analysis! The texture dissections I think could use some work It seems like you've drawn outlines rather then cast shadows for most and havent gone in a gradient (dark to light) . I won't expect you to redo, since this may improve in the texture challange. However I will say I like the pineapple,raspberry, tomato and andpaper textures!
Form intersections I found these hard to do aswell so great job giving it a go! I think you shouldve overlapped some a bit more since I cant see some intersections that much, there was also supposed to be a page dedicated to ONLY boxes I reccomend doing this as I thought they helped understand intersections more. Overall, the lines look very neat and done confidently, the perspectives look to be continous aswell.
For your organic intersections I don't have alot to say as I think you've done well on those.
Next Steps:
Im going to mark it as complete, as I've said the textures can be tackled in the challenges or in your own time. For the arrows remeber to be confident with your lines. Keep it up you've got it! You may start lesson 3
Color and Light by James Gurney
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