Hi, and welcome to drawabox! I’ll be looking through this~

Starting off with the lines section, the superimposed lines exercise is looking great. Your lines are smooth, properly lined up at the start, and of a consistent trajectory. The ghosted lines/planes look quite confident as well, and I’m glad to see that you’re plotting some start/end points for the non-diagonal center lines of the planes, too- most students forget.

Moving on to the ellipse section, the table of ellipses exercise is nicely done. Your ellipses are smooth, and rounded, and do a good job of fitting within their frames. They don’t maintain a consistent degree/angle per frame however, so be a little more careful in regards to that. I also notice that some of them will start off a little stiff, then stabilize during their second rotation. Though it’s certainly scary to commit to one, it’s important to do so confidently from the start, so see if ghosting a little more removes that issue. Ultimately, the purpose of ghosting is to become familiar enough with the motion that there’s no hesitation when it comes time to commit to it- as your muscles are already familiar with what they should be doing. The ellipses in planes exercise looks okay. Your ellipses maintain their roundness, despite the added difficulty of having to touch all 4 sides of the plane. They’ve been drawn through a little too much, however. Remember that you’re meant to go around them 2-3 times (regardless of how they turn out.) The funnels exercise looks solid- the minor axis does a good job of cutting each ellipse into two equal, symmetrical halves. They do get a little deformed near the edges, but this is expected. I will, however, recommend extending your minor axis all the way, or, conversely, not adding another ellipse if there’s no minor axis to align it to.

Finally, there’s the box section. Starting off, the plotted perspective exercise looks clean- nice job. Moving on to the rough perspective exercise, this starts off strong, and improves nicely throughout the set. I’m happy to see that your lines continue being confident, despite the many things you’re thinking of at this stage. Not only that, but you’ve been careful that 2 sets of them are parallel/perpendicular to the horizon, as they should be, and 1 set converges towards the vanishing point. Said convergences are not always perfect, but this is more than expected. To help, I’ve got 2 tips. The first, is to spend a little longer planning your points. Remember that perfectly fine to ignore them if they’re unsatisfactory. To find out if they are, ghost a line to the end point, and beyond it, to the horizon, to see where it intersects it. If it doesn’t at the vanishing point, then adjust accordingly. The second, is to recall that, because of the rules of perspective, the front/back faces of your box are identical in shape, but not size (the back one is smaller.) As such, if you see your points suggesting something different (like, say, the front face being a square, and the back face a rectangle), you know that there’s been a mistake somewhere, so see if you can reconsider your points. Fantastic job on the rotated boxes exercise. Though the rotation itself is a little slight, you’ve drawn through your boxes, and kept their gaps narrow. The addition of hatching does a lot to clarify what’s what, too, and I’m pleased to see that the level of quality is still consistent, despite the difficulty. Finally, as I’ve come to expect from you at this point, the organic perspective exercise looks great. Your boxes flow nicely, as a result of a subtle, and believable increase in size, many overlaps, and consistent, shallow foreshortening. One thing I’ll mention is that line-weight should be applied locally (that is to say, to the part of the box that’s overlapping another, as opposed to the entirety of it), and to the silhouette of the box only (as a way to ‘hold it together’; applying line-weigh to the inner lines of a box makes it read as a collection of lines, more so than a box.) Also, it would've been fine to experiment with some different types of boxes, rather than just cubes, but it’s of no concern, as there’ll be plenty of time to play around with that in the box challenge. Speaking of, feel free to move on to it!