You did this exercises pretty nice
In the lines exercises you wobbling a little but that´s completely normal
And the others exercises are pretty good
Next Steps:
keep doing the 250 boxes challenge, I´d recommend you use some of the exercises of this lesson as a warm up
This looks really nice!
You actually have a similar habit to myself, wherein you seem to hesitate on your lines when you place your pen (possibly from spending a little too much time lining up your pen), causing them to wave slightly at the beginning of the line.
There are also a couple spots in the organic perspective exercise where you seem to have messed up a line and drawn it again, or undershot it and tried to extend it. I'm guilty of it myself, and it's a bad habit to get into. Try your best to avoid it as much as you can moving forward.
Additionally - and this isn't a critique so much as a recommendation - for future submissions it would be helpful to spend a minute framing your photos so they're evenly lit (no shadow) and rotating and/or cropping them to the correct orientation. I know imgur has a tool to do this. If you're not able to find a space to take these with brighter lighting, that's not a major issue; I just know it's a bit easier to give critique when the lines are clearly visible.
That aside, your lines are confident, your ellipses are even and round, and you seem to be getting a good handle on perspective. Onto 250 boxes!
Next Steps:
Move onto the 250 Box Challenge
Thank you for a quite detailed critique!!
Wasn't expecting to wait for a week lmao.
This is a remarkable little pen. Technically speaking, any brush pen of reasonable quality will do, but I'm especially fond of this one. It's incredibly difficult to draw with (especially at first) due to how much your stroke varies based on how much pressure you apply, and how you use it - but at the same time despite this frustration, it's also incredibly fun.
Moreover, due to the challenge of its use, it teaches you a lot about the nuances of one's stroke. These are the kinds of skills that one can carry over to standard felt tip pens, as well as to digital media. Really great for doodling and just enjoying yourself.
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