6:24 PM, Wednesday August 24th 2022
Hello, today I am going to be critiquing your work on lesson one.
Lines
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On your superimposed lines, I noticed that some of lines have a wobble to them. You should always strive to make smooth,consistent, and confident lines without any hesitations.
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On the ghosted lines, your lines are wobbling.
Ensure to always prioritize confidence in drawing your lines as accuracy will come with practice.
- In your ghosted planes, I see that you have repeated some of lines in your planes. Try not to repeat your lines as it as this will only make mistakes more obvious.
Ellipses
-In your table of ellipses, you made a earnest effort to keep your ellipses within the confines of the table. Just remember to draw through your ellipses at least twice. Trying to draw your ellipses / circles in one stroke will cause you to draw them wobbly, bumpy, or as open shapes.
-Your ellipses in planes is similar to your table of ellipses; remember to draw through any ellispes at least two times. You want to prioritize confidence and smoothness over accuracy.
-On your ellipses in funnels exercise, you made your ellipses fit within the confines of the funnels. Some of them are misalign with the axis but this will get better with practice.
Boxes
-In your plotted perspective, I see nothing wrong here.
-In rough perspective exercise, you made a honest effort to plot your boxes to the vanishing point. Just remember to try not to repeat lines, as this makes mistakes more glaring and obvious.
-Your rotated boxes exercise is well completed as you rotated the boxes to the best of your ability and that your lines are executed with confidence.
-Your organic perspective exercise was well executed as I feel you have a good beginning grasp on perspective. Just keep in mind what I said about repeating lines.
*Moving forward, remember to use these beginner lessons as warm ups for future ones.
*In the future, ensure to take clearer, brighter photos of your work to allow for easier critiquing from others.
I will mark your lesson as complete. You should now move on the the 250 box challenge.
Next Steps:
250 box challenge