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12:54 AM, Sunday April 10th 2022
Hello I’m Angela and I’ll be critiquing your work!!
Lines:
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There is some fraying on both ends make sure to place your pen on the starting point
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Make sure to prioritize confidence over accuracy
Ellipses:
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Make sure to ghost your ellipses before actually putting them down.
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Some of your ellipses are wobbly again prioritize confidence over accuracy , some of your circles don’t touch all sides.
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The size of your ellipses aren’t changing. Make sure to read the instructions carefully
Boxes:
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Hatching should be done with a ruler
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I don’t think you should need hatching on the boxes for Rough perspective (even so the hatching are on the wrong side). It looks like your not ghosting your lines.
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Some of your boxes aren’t rotating
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Again looks really rushed , make sure to ghost your lines.
It seems like your rushing on the exercises make sure to take your time to ghost your lines. Also remember to prioritize confidence over accuracy. + it would be easier if you could put the pages in order. Anyways good job!
Next Steps:
250 Box Challenge. Good luck :)!
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