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1:23 AM, Monday July 10th 2023
Hi, I'll be reviewing your hw. Make sure when uploading the images are right side up.
Superimposed Lines: A few of you lines have fraying on both ends. Not all of them, but I did notice. Always make sure to start from your intital dot. The good news is the lines are straight and most of these are solid.
Ghosted Lines: Some of the lines do miss the dots but these are straight and solid. Well done.
Ghosted Planes: I love that you included the original ghosted planes before drawing elipses in them. As for how they are, a small number of lines are not quiet making it but most of them are. So good job.
Table of Elipses: Beautiful and solid tables. Well done.
Elipses In Planes: This one was a little rough. Either your elipses were a little short of the mark or breaking out of the boundries of your lines. But I can tell you seem to get this. A word of advice really ghost the elipses before making that first stroke.
Funnels: Here the elipses are tighter but the only thing is make sure the funnels are a little more spaced out. Some of them are running into each other. But good work.
Ploted perspective: Beautiful solid black lines. Wonderful.
Rough Perspective: Well done. i can tell in your second one it got better so good work.
Rotated Boxes: This one is a bit more square then like a sphere but looking at it there is roation of the boxes.
Organic Perspective: I see you managed to do well in this too.
Next Steps:
Final thoughts. The rotated box sphere was probably the weakest. So when moving on just make sure to warm up with the 250 box challenge. It will be tough but I'm sure you can do it. I will make this lesson as completed.
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