1:32 PM, Wednesday January 4th 2023
Overall Review:
lines are too wobbly and eclipses are going out of assigned boundaries, also ghosting method wasn't seen often.
Detailed Review
Lines
In this section your lines are completely straight and banged on point! Even in ghosted planes, the lines are pretty nice and clean with very less wobble! so overall it was good section with ghosting method used.
Eclipses
Tables of eclipses
The eclipses are going out of the assigned boundaries. Please pay attention to get the eclipses in the assigned place.
Ghosted planes eclipses
The eclipses are going out of the assigned boundaries, please look in to attentively. Your lines here are curved a bit, to improve this, you can curve the line consciously opposite to where it was getting curved. It will result your lines to get straight.
Funnels
Well it is okay, but your funnels mostly came out as straight pipe, so it gave less room for variation of the eclipses. The eclipses should change according to change in the position. There is less variation, but that's okay! you will get it eventually.
Boxes
Rough perspective
Here, the lines are too much wobbly also ghosting method isn't used. Do your lines with confidence, it is okay for the perspective to go wrong. But, you should do a confident strike. Practice lines in ghosting method only. It helps in future lessons. I am recommending you to do this homework again only for your confident strike and using of ghosting method. Perspective is bound to go wrong, but your line confidence should be there, which i saw in lines homework.
Rotated boxes
I feel you understood this exercise, it also looks pretty much decent. it has less wobbly lines compared to your prior homework.
Organic perspective
Too much wobbly lines in this section. I can't differentiate between where is your ending and starting point. Please look into making more confident boxes. I am recommending you to this homework again. You understood what you had to do, but here also ghosting method wasn't used and lines aren't confident.
If you have any query regarding this review, feel free to ask.
Thank you!
Next Steps:
revision: rough perspective and organic perspective.