2:16 PM, Friday July 7th 2023
Hi, Teh_stamper.
Congrats on completing this challenge you've done noble.
Well, I reviewed the boxes and I must say you put in alot of effort. Anyways, here are specific points I'll like to bring to your attention
- Lineweight:
This is meant to be used on the silhouette of the boxes and to show the 3D form of the box on 2D paper you tried well in this aspect, however a few boxes were superimposed on all lines not just the silhouette, an example is box no. 87
2 Extended lines and convergence:
This exercise dealt with boxes in 3 point perspective. To Cross check our work personally we are required to extend the 3 sets of lines away from the viewer and for this you did it well on about 249 boxes. I also noticed complete convergence on some sets of lines like box no. 3 on the LHS specifically
I'll advise that you include this in your warmups going forward and try to improve the convergence. This can be done by drawing a line while still considering the other 3 in it's set and imagining a VP on the page.
I must also include that you tried to apply rapid foreshortening which is well commended.
I appreciate the hatching on your boxes, hope you ghosted those lines too.
This exercise was tough but you're tougher you just had an opportunity to ghost lines over 3000 times.
Well done I'm marking this lesson as complete because I think you've grabbed the basics of 3 point perspective.
Next Steps:
Move on to lesson 2





