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11:01 PM, Monday August 22nd 2022

Unfortunately that does not appear to have much in common with the head construction demo I asked you to follow:

  • The eye sockets are different shapes (6 sided instead of 5 sided)

  • Your lower jaw is a partial/flat shape coming off the cranial ball - I'm not seeing any attempt at defining the muzzle as a single block and establishing how it connects to the cranial ball in 3D space

  • The forehead area is not being established

Out of curiosity, what notes/diagrams did you refer to when drawing this?

12:54 AM, Tuesday August 23rd 2022

https://photos.app.goo.gl/4BUcr79ShjzRvfxc8

I use this picture has reference and tiger head drawing has notes

1:30 AM, Tuesday August 23rd 2022

If you go back to my critique of your first attempt at Lesson 5, you'll find this lengthy section on head construction. You'll also find this at the top of the tiger head demo which points you to the same informal head construction demo.

You need to review all the feedback I've given you thus far.

1:59 AM, Tuesday August 23rd 2022
edited at 2:01 AM, Aug 23rd 2022

I will review all feedback and Do a head constructio to see if I am getting it.(Going to use the same photo)

edited at 2:01 AM, Aug 23rd 2022
1:38 PM, Tuesday August 23rd 2022

I have gone over all your feedback and notes. these heads drawing are a reflection of that

(Same reference photo I use before)

https://photos.app.goo.gl/iiykL2E4nB8N1Zry9

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