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6:37 PM, Tuesday June 30th 2020
edited at 6:39 PM, Jun 30th 2020

Hey thanks for the really awesome feedback!!

Funny story (well not really) about the Funnels. If you look at that page again, you'll see that the date is at the bottom and upside down. So I actually started at the top doing it wrong, I thought I was meant to tightly group them, then realized half way through that this wasn't correct :D! So I've done the Funnels homework again here: https://imgur.com/gallery/qaQKc8n

Regardless I do find these ellipses difficult! When drawing over them 2 times it's so hard to make it look like a single line!

For Rough Perspective, your lines have a good bit of wobble to them. Remember, the goal is not accuracy but confidence in your lines.

Good point! I find especially for lines which are shorter in length it's much harder to control the movement with my shoulder! But you're totally right, I must focus on ghosting and then just commit and be confident and smooth (this is something I'll really focus on during the 250 boxes!)

Rotated boxes yeah I messed that one up, I realized too late that I was really under rotating! During the Organic perspective exercise I felt like I really started to understand it much better the more I did!

Thanks again for the feedback!

edited at 6:39 PM, Jun 30th 2020
7:31 PM, Tuesday June 30th 2020

Your revised page of funnels looks great; I'd say you're all set for 250 boxes! I've so far done just under 50 boxes, and boy... it's really challenging, much more so than the exercises in the box section of Lesson 1. Just keep going though and you should get the hang of it. Best of luck!

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