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4:19 PM, Thursday March 4th 2021

Overall you did a great job!

Here are some things you can work on:

  1. Line confidence(I noticed that some of your lines felt a little wobbly)

  2. Focus on simplifying your sausage shapes

I hope this helps!

8:04 AM, Wednesday March 10th 2021

thank you!

How to simplify, to be exact? I showed early versions of my sausages in discord and someone said me that there are too clean and unnaturally ideal.

3:06 PM, Sunday March 14th 2021

Ideally you want to draw your sausages as Mr. Uncomfortable detailed in the Text dissection video. Hope that helps!

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A lot of my students use these. The last time I used them was when I was in high school, and at the time I felt that they dried out pretty quickly, though I may have simply been mishandling them. As with all pens, make sure you're capping them when they're not in use, and try not to apply too much pressure. You really only need to be touching the page, not mashing your pen into it.

In terms of line weight, the sizes are pretty weird. 08 corresponds to 0.5mm, which is what I recommend for the drawabox lessons, whereas 05 corresponds to 0.45mm, which is pretty close and can also be used.

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