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9:18 AM, Friday January 28th 2022
edited at 11:28 AM, Jan 28th 2022

Hello Beck this is my resubmission for organic intersection. https://imgur.com/a/y6p1wxY Thank you for the critique!

edited at 11:28 AM, Jan 28th 2022
2:39 PM, Friday January 28th 2022

Okay, I think you need more time to get comfortable with this exercise. You are getting a sense for how to pile the sausages on top of each other, but you can still do a better job when it comes to the cast shadows, these are no different from the countour lines, that means that when you draw them you should also be mindful of how the surface they are falling on turns in space. Try drawing them perpendicularly to the sausage, most of them look like they are running parallel to it.

So keep all of these things in mind for your future attempts at this exercise, I'm pleased with your work so far so I'll mark this lesson as complete

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3:13 PM, Friday January 28th 2022

Thank you Beck! I'll make sure to practice This exercise a Hell Lot more. I wish you well on your artistic journey

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