Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes
8:12 PM, Tuesday July 18th 2023
pls critique and point out my mistake Thank youu !!!!
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2:50 AM, Friday July 28th 2023
Hello I'll be covering your HW. Make sure for future uploads the order of what you're supposed to do is in order so future submisions the one doing the critique will not have to jump around to see your stuff.
Superimposed lines: A few having fraying at both ends, but most don't show this. Good work.
Ghosted Lines: Solid straight lines that all meet their matching ends. Well done.
Ghosted Planes: These appear to be solid. Well done.
Table of Elipses: Good attempt keeing everything tight. But a number are breaking out of bounds.
Elipses in a Plane: Still quiet a few brekaing out of boundries. But you do seem to understand the direcitons.
Funnels: A lot better with keeping things in boundries.
Plotted Perspective: Overall no issues here.
Rough Perspective: This one is tricky. I think you do undrestand the concept.
Rotated Boxes: This one is tricky, this looks less like a sphere. But I do think you understand.
Organic Perspective: Solid work.
Next Steps:
Before you move onto 250 boxes, I would suggest when warming up make sure to practice ghosting and reading on different angles for sphere. Doing so might help avoid some of the things I noticed that will come into play for the next thing. But if you are comfortable with moving on, then go for it.
7:31 PM, Friday July 28th 2023
thank you
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