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6:48 PM, Sunday July 3rd 2022
-your lines arch a little so pay attention to that but few wobbly lines so it means you are confident in them.
-the funnel exercise needs more variation like the ellipse needs to get smaller the closer they get to the center of the line go over it again maybe.
-overall it looks like you did quite well.
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8:30 PM, Sunday July 3rd 2022
Yeah you're right. Thanks for the feedback!
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7:16 PM, Sunday July 3rd 2022
I love the confidence of your marks in the line exercises, great work. I would recommend trying to exaggerate the rotation of your boxes in the rotating boxes exercises to make sure it's more effective.
8:31 PM, Sunday July 3rd 2022
I'll try and do that. Thank you so much!
12:50 PM, Thursday July 7th 2022
Keep it up:)
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