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7:54 PM, Sunday June 20th 2021

Hi,

Your linework is fine but you didn't extend your lines back to check your work. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/15/step6 When you are asked to do a revision that means doing the exercise completely. So can you please finish this and then I'll mark this as complete and you can move on to the 250 box challenge.

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Finish your page of the rough perspective exercise by extending the lines back to check your work. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/15/step6

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
3:16 AM, Monday June 21st 2021

Sorry about that. Here is the completed revision.

https://imgur.com/a/6Q4q40a

3:49 PM, Monday June 21st 2021

Okay, I'm going to mark this as complete and you can move on to the 250 box challenge. Good luck!

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The 250 Box Challenge

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