5:44 AM, Tuesday October 20th 2020
Heyo, I'll totally crit you dude.
Organic arrows: The arrows look pretty good, I do see that a few of them tend to wobble and there seems to be one arrow that has a confusing perspective as I don't see where the shadows are on either side, it does have one area that is shaded but it still is a bit hard to figure out which side is which.
Contour lines: They look great, the lines flow through neatly and evenly, some of the ellipsis are a bit outside of the sausages but the line does flow straight through the middle. But the ellipsis don't have as much variation, most do feel the same. There are a few sausages that have degree variation in the elipsis but the long one has a uniform of ellipsis. The sausages with the contours look good, the lines curve towards the end and they look alright, but they do tend to wobble a bit tho.
Texture Analysis: Looks fantastic!
Dissections: They look great too.
Form intersections: They look good, but it is hard to follow as the lines that are more predominant aren't darkened. I can see where the shapes intersect but I'm not too sure where exactly and which shape is front or behind which.
Organic Intersections: They look pretty good as well.
Next Steps:
I'd recomend redoing the organic forms with the ellipsis and the form intersections, as both seem to be a bit lacking. Try to give the ellipsis a variation in degrees and for the Form intersections try to give a thicker outline to the outter areas of the shapes in the areas that aren't intersecting.
