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9:49 AM, Friday October 23rd 2020

Thanks for critting my submission! The revisions helped, so thank you for recommending them. I wasn't sure if you wanted about the amount of pages you wanted with each exercise so I just did two of each lmao.

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3:36 PM, Friday October 23rd 2020

No prob, they look good as well, I can see the improvement and your understanding of each exercise as well, nice. The ellipsis I see have a greater improvement because of the varying degrees. The intersections are easier to see as well because of the outlines, nice! Glad you found the crit helpful dude, and you can always ask how many pages you can do for each exercise lmao. Anyways hope you found this helpful and have fun with lesson 3 and stay safe!

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Totally tackle either lesson 3 or the 25 texture challenge

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