Critique for lesson 6:
1) Form intersections-
*draw more number of shapes on the page, and draw them close to each other, rather than spacing some out and forming 'groups' of shapes *while draing the intersections, try to visualise how the shapes coming in contact interact and draw the intersections accordingly. Some of the intersections you drew look off
2) Objects-
*the objects look believable and appear to be with correct proportions.
*you can use lineweight and cast shadows to organise your lines and make the object stand out from the rest of the construction lines.
Next Steps:
*revision- 1 page form intersections
Thank you so much for your help.
I must admit intersections are really hard for me to visualise for some reason.
Thank you again.
You seemed to have improved with the revision! Continue practicing this during the warmups, and keep the said points in mind.
Good luck for the next challenges and lessons
Next Steps:
25 wheel challenge
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