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10:38 AM, Wednesday July 8th 2020

Hi! I just finished lesson one too, and I'm not an expert, but maybe my feedback will be of help.

I think your ellipses came out too wobbly, maybe you're hesitating when you're doing them? Remember you're supposed to use the ghosting method and draw them fast and confidently. It's more important that the lines come out smooth than the placing or shape of the ellipse. (But it's still good to keep an eye on that). Also, I read that you're not supposed to redo the lines even if they come out wrong, (which I am very guilty of doing too), just wanted to point that out. In the rotated box exercise, I feel like the boxes in the corners aren't really rotating, but that's okay because this one is really hard. Keep an eye out for wobbly lines, remember to always plot your lines with dots, and I would say maybe it'd be good if you redid the ellipses exercise.

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I think just working on ellipsis and doing them fast and smooth would be good.

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6:05 PM, Monday July 27th 2020

Hey, sorry for the late reply. I proceeded with lesson 2 for some time and now came back for this revision.

I redid a page of each of the ellipses exercises.

https://imgur.com/a/vbMUU4H

I feel the lines are less wobbly now but doing the lines faster to reduce wobblines does worsen the precision of ellipses. Some of their positions are more off now.

3:48 PM, Saturday August 15th 2020

Hey! sorry for the late reply here too! I think they are definitely better now. I think precision shouldn't be your number one priority, as that will get better as you go on. But I really like your ellipses now!

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