Hello hello,

cute animals.

i would recommend you to do this lesson 5 again.

mark your lines with confidence but controlled, they seem to me as if you did them quick in order go get the homework done faster.

and a tipp. use your elipses as guidelines to doubbelchek the proportions.

try to find the "true" form under the fur or feathers. where are the joints, how bis the the muscle etc..

but its a very nice start.