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6:29 PM, Sunday May 29th 2022
edited at 8:46 PM, May 29th 2022

Hey!

Thank you for this critique. It was amazingly helpful! :D

I did the superimposed lines exercise again:

https://imgur.com/a/NZYRstj

And thank you again!

edited at 8:46 PM, May 29th 2022
6:48 PM, Thursday June 2nd 2022

No problem. This set of lines looks better with A LOT less fraying. You did great

Next Steps:

Move on to the 250 box challenge. Good luck

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