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6:29 PM, Sunday May 29th 2022
edited at 8:46 PM, May 29th 2022


Thank you for this critique. It was amazingly helpful! :D

I did the superimposed lines exercise again:

And thank you again!

edited at 8:46 PM, May 29th 2022
6:48 PM, Thursday June 2nd 2022

No problem. This set of lines looks better with A LOT less fraying. You did great

Next Steps:

Move on to the 250 box challenge. Good luck

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Like the Staedtlers, these also come in a set of multiple weights - the ones we use are F. One useful thing in these sets however (if you can't find the pens individually) is that some of the sets come with a brush pen (the B size). These can be helpful in filling out big black areas.

Still, I'd recommend buying these in person if you can, at a proper art supply store. They'll generally let you buy them individually, and also test them out beforehand to weed out any duds.

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