Hey there!
I had actually started with pencil (But I soon got a finetip pen and drew everything in it). Tho there is one extra page of ghosted lines in pencil(and one page of it in pen)
My ghosted planes and ellipses in planes are actually in the same photos
Thank you for the critique!
Hi I will be doing your lesson 1 critique.
Lines
Your Superimposed lines are pretty good.You are keeping a clearly defined starting point with all of your wavering at the opposite end. Your ghosted lines and planes turned out pretty solid . You are using the ghosting method to good effect to get confident linework.Good job on this one.
Ellipses
Now there are some problems with this one.Mainly when drawing trough an ellipse try drawing trough it just 2-3 times so that it dosent get confusing.Some of the ellipses are a bit wobbly and some dont touch the corners of the panel or are drawn trough too many times to the point where its just a redone ellipse. https://imgur.com/a/g0jBSIM Its not all of theme some are really goo and smooth but it does happen way too many times that it becomes an issue.Other than that the rest is good.
Boxes
Plotted perspective is pretty good,nothing to say here.Rough perspective is also really well done same for the rotated boxes.Organic perspective is also very confident and clean one minor mistake I want to point out is that there are some boxes that repeat too much https://imgur.com/a/dUzPnxe . Its not that much of a mistake just try to be more divers with your boxes next time.
Overall this is pretty good submission the only thing you have an issue with are ellipses. Mainly you go trough them too much so they became redone.This is pretty common but remember that In drawabox you should always prioritize confidence over accuracy and dont let fear win you over.
Next Steps:
1 page of tables of ellipses
Hey there! Thanks for the critique
I redid the table of ellipses again (did two pages of it cause the pages i have currently are pretty small(A5))
Great job on this one.In the future try making all of your ellipses look like this since this was a common error in your work.Add lesson 1 to your warm up pool and good luck with 250 box challenge!
Thanks!! Will do!
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