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1:53 PM, Tuesday June 1st 2021

Hey Pitsii! Thank you for joining and submitting your work!

Your lines are looking good but I think you misunderstood the point of the lessons or rushed through them. For example this is how your planes homework should look like.

It is more clear you've rush trough the lesson as we move forward.

Table of ellipses

You've miss the point of the excersise you should've drawn your ellipses knowing before hand the space they'll occupy however they look pretty good.

Funnels

This is how your homerwork should've look like.

I don't have much to say about the Boxes and the challenge. I think you are trying to go to fast and thats not good for you! Take it easy!

Next Steps:

Start by reading the lessons thoroughly.

Redo table of ellipses excersise.

Redo Funnels excersies.

Redo boxes homework.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
2:08 PM, Monday June 14th 2021

Thank you very much for your critique. I took what you said to heart and tried to do everything with a less rushed and more patient approach. Once again thank you very much[]https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1WhOVBGkfllqPCKuVMDUqnmEOJjEauOGO here's the link to the revision drive

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